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Pieces for Review

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PIECES FOR REVIEW

This is where you can post the pieces you have written and would like reviewed. You may also post works by others that you would like to share.If you would like feedback to be personal, please provide an e-mail address. You may also request that responses be made at the next meeting. When personal feedback is not requested, responses containing constructive criticism may be written in a word document and uploaded as 'Reply to _______'. Remember to be polite! Personal comments on the piece may also be typed under the uploaded document.

***To upload a piece, click the "EDIT THIS PAGE" button. Then click the "Attach file" button. Click "Browse," locate the piece in your files, and select it. Then click "Upload." Your piece should now be posted on this page. Don't forget to put your name next to it!

The battle is done.doc-Stephen

AHAHAHAHAH!!! This is a poem on death, kinda. I think its nice, anyways...

Halloween Splash.doc - Stephanie

Ok just tell me if this is completely lame or not...

Darkness on the Edge of Light.doc - Posted by Stephanie

Comments: this is just a poem that I wrote for English in ninth grade. I had to write a reflections poem for Animal Farm. Enjoy! ^__^

Response.doc - posted by Nicole

love lives on the bathroom walls.doc - posted by Nicole

Comments: Yeah... I get inspired by weird things; this one's about all the junk people write in the stall walls in the girl's room... I have no idea if guys do that too, but I kind of think not. In any event, please don't criticize my lack of capitalization -- I just don't find capital letters very aesthetically appealling in my poetry. In any event, it's short, but I like it. Needs a title, though

response_to_bathroom1.doc - via Rachael

Response to Bathroom poem.doc - Stephanie

Diary of a suicide note.doc - posted by Stephanie

just something random...

Comment for Dairy.doc - posted by Emma

Kathryn Withering Heights.doc